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metaheroes2022-01-22 09:21 pm
ikols) wrote in metaheroes2022-01-22 09:21 pm
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[ You may not realise it, heroes and villains, but there is a war going on. A Strange VS. Loki war. Did it begin because Stephen pissed Loki off? Maybe. Is it petty? Absolutely. Enjoy it. ]
I would like some feedback on the slash fanfic I've been writing in my downtime. Constructive criticism is appreciated.
[ Loki clears his throat and reads off an iPad. ]
"Forsooth! What light beyond yonder window breaks? It is the repulsor, and Metal Man is the sun!"
Thus did Stefan Redcloak cry to the balcony of Avenger's Tower, levitating outside until the object of his affections sashayed into view. Stefan swooned through the clouds as Toby Stank's piercing violet eyes met his own boring brown pair and their hands clasped tight, drawing him in close to his beloved's glistening, pursed lips.
"I have destroyed Fanhos," he declared, a rainbow set of DND dice floating above his head as he spoke, each refracting their hue over Toby's high cheekbones to enthral Stefan all the more so that his words became aching breaths of want, "now we may be together forever, my darling!"
"Oh, me, oh my!" exclaimed Toby, tearing away from Stefan. It was not relief but GRIEF in his eyes! His silken robe fluttered in his wake as he strode back into the tower where the sunlight could not adore his handsomeness. "I am undone, Stefan! I told you never to fight on my behalf! Nay, not even if our entire universe depended on it! I am my own man!"
"Toby, my radiant astral heart, I had to! If I had not defeated Fanhos, it was written he would journey to thy bedchamber and ruin your honour asunder! I did this for us!"
"I SAY THEE NAY!!!" shrieked Toby, casting a metal finger of truth at Stefan who cowered where he stood. "Thou hast totally done this for thine own self, what pride ye feel is fed by this triumph. No love for me commanded such actions! Had we but worked together, I would not have been left to languish on a bed of grapes in ANGUISH until your proud return!"
Redcloak recoiled along the wall in turmoil, rolling with the force of Toby's righteous wrath as it dazzled his misguided senses. His heart SHATTERED in his chest, remade only when he crawled back into Toby's view.
"My one true love, my only dom —"
"I am leaving you, Stefan."
A cold silence fell on Avengers Tower. The sun, sensing Toby's heavy heart, hid behind the clouds. Somewhere on the street, dogs howled.
"No ... !"
"I am leaving you ............... for CAPTAIN FLAG!!!"
[ Loki sits up and smiles blandly at the screen, calmly lowering the ipad. ]
I think we'll leave it there for tonight, dear followers. Any flaming will be blocked, thank you for your time.
[FUCK YOU, STEPHEN STRANGE. ]
I would like some feedback on the slash fanfic I've been writing in my downtime. Constructive criticism is appreciated.
[ Loki clears his throat and reads off an iPad. ]
"Forsooth! What light beyond yonder window breaks? It is the repulsor, and Metal Man is the sun!"
Thus did Stefan Redcloak cry to the balcony of Avenger's Tower, levitating outside until the object of his affections sashayed into view. Stefan swooned through the clouds as Toby Stank's piercing violet eyes met his own boring brown pair and their hands clasped tight, drawing him in close to his beloved's glistening, pursed lips.
"I have destroyed Fanhos," he declared, a rainbow set of DND dice floating above his head as he spoke, each refracting their hue over Toby's high cheekbones to enthral Stefan all the more so that his words became aching breaths of want, "now we may be together forever, my darling!"
"Oh, me, oh my!" exclaimed Toby, tearing away from Stefan. It was not relief but GRIEF in his eyes! His silken robe fluttered in his wake as he strode back into the tower where the sunlight could not adore his handsomeness. "I am undone, Stefan! I told you never to fight on my behalf! Nay, not even if our entire universe depended on it! I am my own man!"
"Toby, my radiant astral heart, I had to! If I had not defeated Fanhos, it was written he would journey to thy bedchamber and ruin your honour asunder! I did this for us!"
"I SAY THEE NAY!!!" shrieked Toby, casting a metal finger of truth at Stefan who cowered where he stood. "Thou hast totally done this for thine own self, what pride ye feel is fed by this triumph. No love for me commanded such actions! Had we but worked together, I would not have been left to languish on a bed of grapes in ANGUISH until your proud return!"
Redcloak recoiled along the wall in turmoil, rolling with the force of Toby's righteous wrath as it dazzled his misguided senses. His heart SHATTERED in his chest, remade only when he crawled back into Toby's view.
"My one true love, my only dom —"
"I am leaving you, Stefan."
A cold silence fell on Avengers Tower. The sun, sensing Toby's heavy heart, hid behind the clouds. Somewhere on the street, dogs howled.
"No ... !"
"I am leaving you ............... for CAPTAIN FLAG!!!"
[ Loki sits up and smiles blandly at the screen, calmly lowering the ipad. ]
I think we'll leave it there for tonight, dear followers. Any flaming will be blocked, thank you for your time.
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